Crowds can be manipulated. For example Adolf Hitler, and Martin Luther King.
Reflection
I believe my my claim matters and is it important to argue this topic because being manipulated is wrong but at times for the good purposes. For instance, Martin Luther King manipulated the crowd for a good purpose so he can abolish hate and establish peace, Adolf Hitler on the other hand did the opposite. He manipulated people to hate other people and kill.
Your reflection goes right to the "meat" of the topic. Would like to see you develop your ideas even more. You could have put a period rather than a comma after "peace."
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